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storm
Nov 22, 2005 18:00:04 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 22, 2005 18:00:04 GMT -8
Lol, my dad was like really tall, so I get my 'tallness' from him. Lol.
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storm
Nov 22, 2005 14:36:15 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 22, 2005 14:36:15 GMT -8
I'm tall for my age...
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storm
Nov 21, 2005 15:41:43 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 21, 2005 15:41:43 GMT -8
oops, 5'4''
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storm
Nov 21, 2005 15:34:22 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 21, 2005 15:34:22 GMT -8
I'm like 5'5''
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storm
Nov 20, 2005 20:38:25 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 20, 2005 20:38:25 GMT -8
That's funny, people think I'm older then I am too...but I'm tall!
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storm
Nov 14, 2005 14:29:46 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 14, 2005 14:29:46 GMT -8
I'm almost 13.
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storm
Nov 11, 2005 8:04:13 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 11, 2005 8:04:13 GMT -8
I was just going through all the posts, ScarletMornings your only 14? Wow, I thought you were older then that. I'm younger then 14 but wow! I never thought you were 14! Sorry...lol.
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storm
Nov 11, 2005 7:59:09 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 11, 2005 7:59:09 GMT -8
I like this poem alot. It's really good. Just listen to what everyone is saying and don't feel intimidated. Judging by the looks of things, you don't need much improvement.
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Tetris
Nov 2, 2005 19:14:40 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 2, 2005 19:14:40 GMT -8
That's kewl.
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Post by darktears on Nov 2, 2005 19:26:25 GMT -8
It's short but sweet. Needs some editing, maybe make it longer, if you could...and otherwise it's a very cute, festive poem.
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Post by darktears on Nov 2, 2005 19:18:56 GMT -8
This was so well writen. And I can just feel the emoticion and it's great. I very great poem. Nice Job!
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9-11
Aug 25, 2005 9:44:14 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Aug 25, 2005 9:44:14 GMT -8
OOh, I liked it. It was a bold message. I'm so happy that somebody actually used that topic to make a poem. Good job! *claps*
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Loveday
Aug 10, 2005 16:11:40 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Aug 10, 2005 16:11:40 GMT -8
Wow. I liekd it alot. It was very tricky
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Red Rum
Aug 10, 2005 16:10:03 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Aug 10, 2005 16:10:03 GMT -8
Wow, that was very good. I loved it.
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Post by darktears on Aug 1, 2005 13:00:07 GMT -8
|| This is a poem I had posted before. I decided to take some of the advice I was given, well most of it, and add a few more stanzas and fix the spelling errors.||
Once Again, You Call to Me. Once Again, You Cry. You Never Really Seem To Be, The Girl Inside Who Tries.
Now I know Once Again, Who You Really Are. Your Nothing, But the Dieing End. Inside A Moving Car.
Your Smile May Seem Sweet To Some. But To Me It Is The Dead. It Isn't Really That Sweet, Your Like An Alligator Who's Just Been Fed.
All The Time I See What's Real, While Other's See What's Fake. You Are Just A Lie No One Can See, But Soon The Others Will Wake.
Your Like Sticky Maple Syrup, Everyone Seems To Gravitate To You. It's Good Thing, I Walk Away, Or Else I would be Stuck Too.
So I Take A Step Backwards. Into My Old Life And Friends. Then I Know, Between You And Me. This Really Is The End.
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