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Post by darktears on Nov 29, 2005 15:27:50 GMT -8
I liked this quite a bit, actually. Hee hee, some of it did seem like, ooh, how to put it like different, eh, hate that word but. Yeah.
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Post by darktears on Dec 2, 2005 20:54:17 GMT -8
I really like this too. I also love how it sounds so like bouncy and stuff. I just can picture this in my mind, and I love when I can do that with things, it seems so great. I just love this, very well done!
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Post by darktears on Dec 3, 2005 14:12:54 GMT -8
There are words that I used to use alot and stuff like good and sad but now that I've become a better write and I've seen those words used so many times, it bugs me to use them now.
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Post by darktears on Dec 2, 2005 20:50:58 GMT -8
Oh, I love this so much! It's just so different(once again, I hate that word) but so good. I don't know what I like about it, I just do. Ooh, so nice.
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Post by darktears on Nov 13, 2005 18:04:51 GMT -8
That breakfast in bed one is so cute and it's so funny. I love it! It's really good.
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Post by darktears on Nov 16, 2005 14:37:43 GMT -8
That was really cool, I really liked it. It was so different and unique, like who would ever think of writing something about a pillow? Amazing where people get ideas from. That was really good, I enjoyed it. Good Job.
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Post by darktears on Nov 14, 2005 15:37:56 GMT -8
And it was so different and unusual I guess, Can't think of a better word at this moment, that is just worked, you know?
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Post by darktears on Nov 14, 2005 15:37:25 GMT -8
I like this alot! I really enjoyed it. I espiecally liked the line "Glorious fires of the night,", omg loved that line! It was really good.
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When I
Nov 14, 2005 14:29:07 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 14, 2005 14:29:07 GMT -8
Lol, that isn't mean, lol. I like getting criticism, so bring it on!
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When I
Nov 13, 2005 11:32:09 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 13, 2005 11:32:09 GMT -8
Okay, thanks for the criticism.
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When I
Nov 11, 2005 8:11:47 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 11, 2005 8:11:47 GMT -8
I haven't written poetry in a little while, like serious poety. I've written little things at school but I decided to try it again.
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When I
Nov 11, 2005 8:11:05 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 11, 2005 8:11:05 GMT -8
When I look into your eyes, I see myself smile. When I touch your hand, I feel my spirit rise.
You are you, Thankfully, Nobody can change, How you've been made.
Only I can see, What others cannot. Only I can see, What others don't know. Only I can feel, Your heart beat. Only I can feel, Your tears fall.
Nobody else, Understands what we have. Nobody else, Will know, exactly how we feel.
Please don't ever leave me, I ask you once again, You promise, Together Forever, until the end.
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storm
Dec 3, 2005 14:10:44 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Dec 3, 2005 14:10:44 GMT -8
I like that saying, "If they can send one man to the moon, why can't they send them all?"
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storm
Dec 1, 2005 16:48:49 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Dec 1, 2005 16:48:49 GMT -8
I'm always the youngest for some reason too....Hmmm
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storm
Nov 25, 2005 15:55:15 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Nov 25, 2005 15:55:15 GMT -8
I'm mature for my age too, or some say. I guess I kinda am, People always think I'm older then I am.
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