Cause you must go. "Must" seems out of place here because the rest of the first stanza is more casual in tone.
Please just let me know. No more secrets or lies About yourself. Don't, Don't hide from me. I can help you, baby. Please don't scream. I LOVE how you transition to "please don't scream" here, it's kind of sudden, but it's a subtle surprise.
Id love to break the silence But I know, But I know I can't. Very nice work here. Beautiful.
So I can dry your tears. So I can get rid of your fears. So I can be your angel. So I can speak to you. So I know what's wrong now, these lines all seem kind of overused to me.
I know you cry. Nice. Humanizing.
I'm amazed at how much you've improved since you first joined this forum.
I actually like this the way it is, it's cute but it has a level that's deepr than just "cute." And I can relate to it, especially the last three lines in teh fourth stanza. Anyway, I'm not sure if I can help with this one, because it seems like it's something pretty personal to you. I'm sorry I can't be more helpful.
"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years.
For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."