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Post by Ramona on Jul 31, 2005 14:11:26 GMT -8
It's really cool, original because it's about having a bad day and not a bad life. But I'd imagine it'd be kind of weird to sing cranky, kind of a hard word to get your mouth around, but that makes it more of an achievemtn! By all means, sing!
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Post by Ramona on Feb 6, 2005 16:37:05 GMT -8
It was interesting adn angry. liked the 'p.s.' thing. Rock on.
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Post by Ramona on Feb 6, 2005 16:35:33 GMT -8
I'd say it was an awesome, catchy little song. Easy to remember and probably to sing. Pair it with a good melody and you're set to rock. Beautiful.
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Post by Ramona on Jan 17, 2005 13:56:25 GMT -8
It was an overall good song. The fact that it didn't have any complex analogies or imagery in it made it different, and good. The raw emotion of it was illustrated in its simplicity. Good work, all in all.
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Post by Ramona on Jul 27, 2005 15:04:24 GMT -8
It sounds/looks like a good song.
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Welcome
Dec 9, 2004 14:20:47 GMT -8
Post by Ramona on Dec 9, 2004 14:20:47 GMT -8
No, actually, it's just that some people don't like to reply to others' work, they just want theirs commented on. Anyways, I think it had some good places, and some not-so-good places. I thought the repetition might be a bit much, but maybe it's background voices or something, I'd like to hear the melody on this one. If you can record it or something, could you send it to me at allergictowonderbread@yahoo.com? Thanks, and keep it up.
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Post by Ramona on Mar 6, 2005 16:28:56 GMT -8
The rhythm wasn't consisten, and tehre was no definite meter, which generally doesn't make for a very good song. I do like the concept and teh beginning, though. It just kind of gets downhill from the chorus. It's also a catchy title, kudos for that.
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Autumn
Nov 22, 2004 16:41:49 GMT -8
Post by Ramona on Nov 22, 2004 16:41:49 GMT -8
It was pretty good. The rhythm needs a little tweaking and the rhymes were pretty common, but it was a nice poem.
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Post by Ramona on Oct 16, 2004 16:55:18 GMT -8
I think it was pretty good, it needed some help with the way it flowed, and teh wording was too simple, and unimaginative at times, but it has a good basis, i suppose. Work on it.
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Post by Ramona on Oct 23, 2004 16:05:32 GMT -8
AGH.
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Post by Ramona on Sept 26, 2004 7:49:55 GMT -8
It was a pretty good song, except for the ending. IT kind of didn't fit with the rest. But, overall, it was alright.
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Post by Ramona on Oct 3, 2004 14:47:06 GMT -8
Why didn't you tell me you didn't know you could write, dude?
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Post by Ramona on Jul 14, 2006 18:39:52 GMT -8
No problem.
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Post by Ramona on Jul 4, 2006 11:19:29 GMT -8
Oh sure, I'll even stick a little blurb up in the news fader for you.
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Post by Ramona on Nov 14, 2005 8:21:50 GMT -8
Oh yeah, sorry about the acocunt approval thingy. When the site upgraded by itself (why cna't I jsut have fair warning?) it defaulted to me having to check off the usernames I wanted to allow to register. I, unfortunately, did not know this until I don't even remember when, but I fixed it so when someone registers they don't need account approval first. Again, sorry about that.
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