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Post by darktears on Jan 4, 2006 20:22:38 GMT -8
I would actually like to see the other lyrics if you don't mind posting them.
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Post by darktears on Nov 30, 2005 15:29:14 GMT -8
I liked it, really sad though. It needs a little work.
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Post by darktears on Dec 5, 2005 16:07:04 GMT -8
I'm currently writing an accompitaint(sp) part in the piano, so I can sing and play this song at the same time.
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Post by darktears on Nov 11, 2005 7:52:22 GMT -8
Ya, thank you! I never thought it would be that good.
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Post by darktears on Nov 10, 2005 16:03:05 GMT -8
Thank you so much! I hope it has touched a lot of people. CF is a very bad thing and it's just heartbreaking to me.
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Post by darktears on Nov 9, 2005 19:58:58 GMT -8
It was just one of those moments when I had to write about something very meaningful to me and to everyone I know.
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Post by darktears on Nov 9, 2005 14:29:52 GMT -8
Thank You Very Much! Yay.
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Post by darktears on Nov 8, 2005 18:28:49 GMT -8
Thank you very much.
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Post by darktears on Nov 8, 2005 17:46:33 GMT -8
We all have fun. While you sit alone. It's so sad, We all Cry for you.
We can not help, Though we've tried before. I wish I could, Make it better. But I can't
*Chorus* Everybody watches and stares, You just look back and smile. You live life to the fullest. You fly higher then everyone else, Butterfly
Your so small and fragile, Nobody wants to hurt you. We all feel so bad. But your just so strong for you.
Were all so worried But you just keep a smile, On your face, Your so special, And so wonderful
*Chorus* Everybody watches and stares, You just look back and smile. You live life to the fullest. You fly higher then everyone else, Butterfly
Oh, everyone can see you, Even though your so small. Oh, And we all can hear you. You have the spirit of an angel. Oh, Butterfly
*Chorus* Everybody watches and stares, You just look back and smile. You live life to the fullest. You fly higher then everyone else, Butterfly.....
That song is written for one of my friends. We're not to close but she has CF (Cystic Fibrosis) It's sad because she is so small. I just wrote this song for her.
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Post by darktears on Nov 9, 2005 14:38:44 GMT -8
I really like that. I do, it's quite good.
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Post by darktears on Nov 8, 2005 17:30:04 GMT -8
I love the ryhme in this poem. It doesn't feel forced which is grrrreat! I love it. Nice Job.
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Post by darktears on Nov 8, 2005 17:33:32 GMT -8
That was really cool. I like the message your giving, it's sad also. I hope your friend is okay. That was quite good.
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Post by darktears on Nov 8, 2005 17:28:22 GMT -8
That was really good, I fully enjoyed it. I also felt like the message was worth reading.
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Post by darktears on Nov 13, 2005 11:25:12 GMT -8
Thank you very much. I have no idea for music...I kind of have a beat for it, but nothing, really. That would be really cool, your idea. To bad I can't play guitar..yet. Thank you very much.
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Post by darktears on Oct 28, 2005 15:15:59 GMT -8
Thank you!
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