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Post by darktears on Oct 13, 2005 13:22:32 GMT -8
Thanks alot!
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Post by darktears on Oct 12, 2005 12:38:43 GMT -8
Tears are falling from her eyes. Her cheek on the mesh pillow. Thoughts racing through her mind, None ever good to her.
Her mother calls her out for dinner. She doesn't answer, Just walks down in silence. Feeling left alone in a world of danger.
*Chorus* Somebody help me please, She screams at night. Her nightmares are real. Unlike yours in your head. She sinks away in a corner, All alone. You don't Notice, No, you don't notice.
Her eyes showing secrets and lies. She tells you I'm fine, But it's not true. You don't know her pain, you never will.
She wish the rain, Could wash her away. Wash away the pain and Misery. Instead of being here.
*Chorus*x2 Somebody help me please, She screams at night. Her nightmares are real. Unlike yours in your head. She sinks away in a corner, All alone. You don't Notice, No, you don't notice.
You don't notice, How she hurts. All you notice, Is the outside.
*Chorus* Somebody help me please, She screams at night. Her nightmares are real. Unlike yours in your head. She sinks away in a corner, All alone. You don't Notice, No, you don't notice.
No, you don't notice.
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Don't
Sept 30, 2005 14:51:48 GMT -8
Post by darktears on Sept 30, 2005 14:51:48 GMT -8
Thank you!
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Don't
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Post by darktears on Sept 24, 2005 14:09:28 GMT -8
Answer me, silently Quietly, oh yea. One afraid, now alive It's all crazy.
Once again, question me Feel it, falling. Dieing, Trying. All together once again. Keep it close to you now, man.
*chorus* Dont Fall Don't Crumble Don't Tear Don't Die It will all be alright... No Matter when No Matter How You Count On Me Somehow... Don't forget your beautiful.
You can try, you can lie, you can wonder How it feels when you live underneath the pressure. The private eye, weird guys falling for you... You never know, where to go 'till you fall. Flat on your face, in the case when you are surrounded.
You know why you cannot breath. Your into deep.
*chorus*x2 Dont Fall Don't Crumble Don't Tear Don't Die It will all be alright... No Matter when No Matter How You Count On Me Somehow... Don't forget your beautiful.
All your worries seem to melt All your troubles they have left. And your mind it starts to think Why you cannot be here with it all.
*chorus*x3 Dont Fall Don't Crumble Don't Tear Don't Die It will all be alright... No Matter when No Matter How You Count On Me Somehow... Don't forget your beautiful.
Don't forget.... Don't forget.... Don't forget you- you are beautiful.
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Post by darktears on Sept 20, 2005 18:39:51 GMT -8
Thanks. I will work on it. I really like this song and would like to work on it lots more!
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Post by darktears on Sept 8, 2005 19:03:01 GMT -8
um..thanks. That all?
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Post by darktears on Sept 6, 2005 8:38:24 GMT -8
Anybody reply please??
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Post by darktears on Aug 24, 2005 10:29:49 GMT -8
Hmmm, nobody is replying. That makes me sad. Lol.
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Post by darktears on Aug 11, 2005 9:01:16 GMT -8
| | I added more to this song. I said I might...and I did. Lol. | |
I walk alone in the shadow Of sleeping people in my mind. I can not make these feelings go away, Sadness lingers behind me.
You cry your tears and wipe your eyes. You smile brightly in the light. I walk away as you smile. It's not like I meant to.
Sometimes I just....
*Chorus* Live a little. Cry a little. Wish that I was with you. And you make me run away from all of my troubles. So I want to..thank you.
Thank you. Thank you. Ooooh, thank you.
You'll catch me whenever I fall. I know you will because, Before it has happened. Thank You. Thank You.
You will light up my darkness, When I am scared and alone. You'll always make me happy. No matter what I do or say.
You Make me...
*Chorus* Live a little. Cry a little. Wish that I was with you. And you make me run away from all of my troubles. So I want to..thank you.
Thank you very much for being you. Thank you very much for letting me be me. You have made me so much better and happier. Just for being you and helping me.
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you. Ooh, thank you.
*Chorus*x2 Live a little. Cry a little. Wish that I was with you. And you make me run away from all of my troubles. So I want to..thank you.
Ooh, thank you.
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Post by darktears on Aug 12, 2005 8:10:30 GMT -8
that's funny.
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Post by darktears on Aug 11, 2005 8:54:20 GMT -8
yes it would make a very good poem I think. It also would make a good song with editing and stuff. I think probaly a nicer poem though.
I just had to say this. When you look to the side of the main page and your on the topic Songs/Lyrics. It says when and where the last person posted. When I posted it said darktears in men's clothes. I thought that was kinda funny.
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Post by darktears on Aug 10, 2005 16:13:57 GMT -8
yes, lol.
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Post by darktears on Aug 5, 2005 12:43:35 GMT -8
It needs a little bit of editing, I think. That's my opinion. That's actually quite good for your first song..I think. It's also interesting in the good way, not the bad one. It made me think.
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Post by darktears on Aug 12, 2005 18:29:35 GMT -8
Thank you. Writing songs is really what I like to do because someday I hope to you know become a musician and write my own songs. So I've started young. I know that sounds weird probally but it's life. Lol. But thanks alot.
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Post by darktears on Aug 5, 2005 12:43:58 GMT -8
Would anyone like to reply?
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