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lelandluver4eva Guest	storm Nov 10, 2005 19:33:52 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by lelandluver4eva on Nov 10, 2005 19:33:52 GMT -8 i really wish i had posted another poem (one of my weaker ones) i think i set the expectations (sp?) too high- but ill try to meet them

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Post by ScarletMornings on Nov 10, 2005 20:18:59 GMT -8

hey, all you can do is improve. don't feel bad if you write something that seems bad to you, because no one is amazing when they first write. just write ALL THE TIME. that's all you can do. thank you for commenting on a thousand shades of darkness. even though this is one of my much older poems, it's still one of my favorites. this was written at a time when i was writing constantly and when i really started liking my poems. don't worry so much about other people. make sure you always write for yourself a little too. well, at least that's what i do. i don't know. it's late. i'm rambling. thank you a whole lot for commenting that one anyways. and just keep posting!

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"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave,
Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind;
Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave.
I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned."

-- Edna St. Vincent Millay,
from "Dirge Without Music"

Go to the link and read it!

darktears Moderator I Don't Want to Mourn Our Love...But I Have a Feeling I Have too... Posts: 345	storm Nov 11, 2005 7:59:09 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by darktears on Nov 11, 2005 7:59:09 GMT -8 I like this poem alot. It's really good. Just listen to what everyone is saying and don't feel intimidated. Judging by the looks of things, you don't need much improvement.
	Chorus I like to drive away from all troubles. After I conquer all my fears. You don't know anything about me. I'd like to leave it that way. I'm not broken.

darktears Moderator I Don't Want to Mourn Our Love...But I Have a Feeling I Have too... Posts: 345	storm Nov 11, 2005 8:04:13 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by darktears on Nov 11, 2005 8:04:13 GMT -8 I was just going through all the posts, ScarletMornings your only 14? Wow, I thought you were older then that. I'm younger then 14 but wow! I never thought you were 14! Sorry...lol.
	Chorus I like to drive away from all troubles. After I conquer all my fears. You don't know anything about me. I'd like to leave it that way. I'm not broken.

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	storm Nov 12, 2005 10:45:00 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Nov 12, 2005 10:45:00 GMT -8 s'all good! i'm barely fourteen. like not quite three months past. i thought queen of rain was like 20, but she's only like 18 apparently. who knew?
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	storm Nov 14, 2005 8:18:04 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Nov 14, 2005 8:18:04 GMT -8 How old are you, darktears? I always thought ScarletMornings was older, too, until she took my interview/questionairre thingy-ma-bobber.
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

darktears Moderator I Don't Want to Mourn Our Love...But I Have a Feeling I Have too... Posts: 345	storm Nov 14, 2005 14:29:46 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by darktears on Nov 14, 2005 14:29:46 GMT -8 I'm almost 13.
	Chorus I like to drive away from all troubles. After I conquer all my fears. You don't know anything about me. I'd like to leave it that way. I'm not broken.

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	storm Nov 15, 2005 17:29:26 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Nov 15, 2005 17:29:26 GMT -8 wow. i guess i sound old? i am very short so i'm used to people thinking i'm younger. weeeeird.
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	storm Nov 16, 2005 8:23:36 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Nov 16, 2005 8:23:36 GMT -8 I'm used to people thinking I'm older, even though I'm short. I suppose I just look older somehow? Hmmm. One of my friends' moms saw me talking to him and wondered why a 16 year old was hanging out with her son. It made me laugh.
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	storm Nov 16, 2005 13:17:37 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Nov 16, 2005 13:17:37 GMT -8 wait. how old are you?
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	storm Nov 17, 2005 9:05:06 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Nov 17, 2005 9:05:06 GMT -8 I'm 14. I was 13 when that happened, it was a few months before my birthday.
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	storm Nov 17, 2005 17:40:43 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Nov 17, 2005 17:40:43 GMT -8 wth? you're FOURTEEN?? wooow.
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

lelandluver4eva Guest	storm Nov 20, 2005 18:38:04 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by lelandluver4eva on Nov 20, 2005 18:38:04 GMT -8 im writing a new poem and ill see about posting on this site later

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	storm Nov 20, 2005 18:46:32 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Nov 20, 2005 18:46:32 GMT -8 Why? What's so amazing about my being fourteen?
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

darktears Moderator I Don't Want to Mourn Our Love...But I Have a Feeling I Have too... Posts: 345	storm Nov 20, 2005 20:38:25 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by darktears on Nov 20, 2005 20:38:25 GMT -8 That's funny, people think I'm older then I am too...but I'm tall!
	Chorus I like to drive away from all troubles. After I conquer all my fears. You don't know anything about me. I'd like to leave it that way. I'm not broken.

Post by lelandluver4eva on Nov 10, 2005 19:33:52 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Nov 10, 2005 20:18:59 GMT -8

Post by darktears on Nov 11, 2005 7:59:09 GMT -8

Post by darktears on Nov 11, 2005 8:04:13 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Nov 12, 2005 10:45:00 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on Nov 14, 2005 8:18:04 GMT -8

Post by darktears on Nov 14, 2005 14:29:46 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Nov 15, 2005 17:29:26 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on Nov 16, 2005 8:23:36 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Nov 16, 2005 13:17:37 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on Nov 17, 2005 9:05:06 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Nov 17, 2005 17:40:43 GMT -8

Post by lelandluver4eva on Nov 20, 2005 18:38:04 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on Nov 20, 2005 18:46:32 GMT -8

Post by darktears on Nov 20, 2005 20:38:25 GMT -8