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Post by taliesin on Nov 26, 2004 13:27:55 GMT -8
It's good. It's good. But what's with the lines in the parentheses?
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Post by taliesin on Oct 26, 2004 17:12:03 GMT -8
Nice. The spelling needs work, but otherwise, it's nice.
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Post by taliesin on Dec 29, 2004 1:47:43 GMT -8
Amen! Rock on!
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Post by taliesin on Dec 29, 2004 1:50:14 GMT -8
Finally, a privilege goes unwasted.
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Post by taliesin on Nov 25, 2004 17:57:32 GMT -8
Maybe they're just attracted to the other boards, like the poetry section or... yeah.
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Post by taliesin on May 29, 2006 20:53:10 GMT -8
Haha! Nice, nice.
AIM-distortedfractal MSN- alientourist13@msn.com
I'm also looking for a keypal from the Czech Republic.
But you don't have to be.
I just want to learn Czech, that's all.
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Post by taliesin on Dec 30, 2004 14:07:12 GMT -8
Wow, what'd your father do to you?!
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Post by taliesin on Dec 29, 2004 23:54:37 GMT -8
Very cool! For the second part, though, I think you should put, when he narrates The gunshot was still ringing maybe you should put "The gunshot was still ringing in my ears. The...
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Post by taliesin on Mar 19, 2005 23:18:06 GMT -8
I agree with Louise. It's not really showing your style. Chapter One, I think, would be more in the tune of Prologue, since it's so short and doesn't match the same person in the main of the story.
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Post by taliesin on Jan 12, 2005 19:49:07 GMT -8
Well, it's good so far. I can't wait for more!
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Andy
Dec 29, 2004 23:46:08 GMT -8
Post by taliesin on Dec 29, 2004 23:46:08 GMT -8
It's nice. Sentimental.
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Post by taliesin on Nov 26, 2004 13:01:38 GMT -8
116. Think about exotic lands and the peoples there, and how their cultures differ from ours. 117. Make up a new world, or something that could just be ours but radically different. 118. Imagine a point of history and ask how the world of today would be like if the point had gone completely the opposite way-What if the British had won the American Revolution? What if Rome had never fell? Stuff like that. 119. Go outside and look at the environment then imagine a disaster happening or something-maybe a bomb blew up the street or aliens landed. 120...
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Post by taliesin on Apr 10, 2005 21:03:02 GMT -8
Just turned fifteen a week ago, on the second!
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Layout
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Post by taliesin on Mar 18, 2005 22:55:30 GMT -8
It's psychadelic! But one detail that gets stuck in my craw is the fact that the links on the page are white-some of them, like page number and whatnot.
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Post by taliesin on Mar 18, 2005 23:02:32 GMT -8
I missed the yellow and white text thing, but whatever. I did catch the stars one, and I liked it.
I would suggest doing contrasting colors, like a strawberry scheme (green and red) or blue and orange. However, it's up to Ramona the Wonder Chameleon to decide however she wants the skin of the page to look like.
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