Simple Serenity

[usgeisha]

A sunset bursting its pinks and oranges behind the sea
A solitary moment of glancing at the stars
Gazing into eyes of someone you love
That one time where everything seems to come to a halt
Simple serenity
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I'll add more, but I gotta go!

[louise]

I don't know if you need to add more. Now it is a simple beautiful poem. If you add more maybe the simplicity will be lost.

[Sparks]

I don't think you need to add any more either.
If simple serenity is what you're going for...I think you pretty much covered it.
Nice.

[tchyarink]

I agree with louise and Sparks, I don't think any additions are necessary... Well it's up to you, but sometimes keeping it simple is the best!
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful poem!