Cry away the world

Confusion
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Cry away the world May 28, 2005 14:43:31 GMT -8

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Post by Confusion on May 28, 2005 14:43:31 GMT -8

'Cry away the world'
Said my tender blood tears

Sweet and innocent
Yet dark
Meaningful

A life you inflicted
A life of pain

Merciless fear
No more to gain
We only lose
What we too once had

Rejoice
Swim through my veins
Through my blood

My misery
Your joy

My pain
Your pleasure

My end
Your beginning

"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	Cry away the world May 29, 2005 7:09:07 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on May 29, 2005 7:09:07 GMT -8 Kind of creepy, but I think that only made it better. I love the end, but I think the phrase 'tender blood tears' was a bit much. That' s just me, though. If you like it, then keep rocking it.
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

Confusion Senior Writer Posts: 518	Cry away the world May 29, 2005 7:44:27 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Confusion on May 29, 2005 7:44:27 GMT -8 lol! thanx very much!!! yea, i think i'll keep it... i'm feeling dark and gothicy so i guess that fits!
	"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

Post by Confusion on May 28, 2005 14:43:31 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on May 29, 2005 7:09:07 GMT -8

Post by Confusion on May 29, 2005 7:44:27 GMT -8