Poems on My Crit List

Pseudomuse
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We went, we saw, we didn't quite conquer.

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Poems on My Crit List Feb 16, 2006 16:13:29 GMT -8

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Post by Pseudomuse on Feb 16, 2006 16:13:29 GMT -8

I thought I'd type up the list of poems I have on my crit list.

my cliché - Cookies
10 Points on the Star of David - behindTHEmask
My Gory Morning Glory - Robin
Guitar Bum - Ramona
Diamond Tears - Scarlet
I Fell In Love with the Man on the Moon - Scarlet
Get Out of Paradise - Robin
Abuse - You Lose - behindTHEmask

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You'll never be quite the same again after that Bible you've been thumping all these years finally has enough and beats the living s**t out of you. - Horoscope in "The Onion"

I thought you just said we were done doing things the stupid way.

If you want to call me that, smile.

Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine.

behindTHEmask Senior Writer "You're beautiful in a way that isn't beautiful at all." Posts: 512	Poems on My Crit List Feb 16, 2006 16:32:52 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by behindTHEmask on Feb 16, 2006 16:32:52 GMT -8 You don't have to do the Abuse, You Lose poem because I basically rewrote three or four stanzas after reviewing it with my Creative Writing teacher. That's one less for you. =]
	I'm not asking you to love me. I'm just asking you to like me really hard. I like you, and I like you bad. [Jakob] of [DeCapulet]

Pseudomuse Senior Writer We went, we saw, we didn't quite conquer. Posts: 489	Poems on My Crit List Feb 17, 2006 18:05:13 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Pseudomuse on Feb 17, 2006 18:05:13 GMT -8 okay dahling. PM
	You'll never be quite the same again after that Bible you've been thumping all these years finally has enough and beats the living s**t out of you. - Horoscope in "The Onion" I thought you just said we were done doing things the stupid way. If you want to call me that, smile. Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine.

Post by Pseudomuse on Feb 16, 2006 16:13:29 GMT -8

Post by behindTHEmask on Feb 16, 2006 16:32:52 GMT -8

Post by Pseudomuse on Feb 17, 2006 18:05:13 GMT -8