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Post by dominicmonaghan on Mar 16, 2007 15:45:07 GMT -8
I actually wrote this a while ago, but I haven't been on this sight in over a year I think... So I decided to finally come back to it. I've missed you guys!
i come from the mountain of solitude living amongst ancient trees filled with pain and loneliness yet sitting upon the depressed, dew-covered moss i feel and sense peace and serenity, even joy! the clear, crystal stream gives me a sense of life i ask the pinecones to free themselves of the branches on which they cling so tightly i beg the leaves to fall, and coat the ground with a soft layer of green i plead for the sunlight to push through the tangle of branches tyring desperately to keep in the night i beg the fog to roll in and for the stream to beckon to any life and make the forest come alive to make my home return to its original beauty... to not be potentially beautiful but to BE beautiful
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Post by ScarletMornings on Mar 26, 2007 17:53:50 GMT -8
i like this. simple but with nice imagery. a little blunt with the wording, but overall a sweet message and a good job!
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