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Post by Queen of Rain on Jul 31, 2006 8:50:00 GMT -8
The things we say
- the sky is blue It may not be but it always is
The sky is certainly blue, may be The pink shades of sunset The gray shades of thunder But some things are the way they are
And we, we're blue, baby
Indeed, the sky is blue
We may not be, but we always are
Its you and me, and we are blue baby like the sky certainly
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Post by Ramona on Aug 2, 2006 19:43:20 GMT -8
I really, really like this. The repetitiveness of the color blue emphasizes without being annoyingly repetitive. Great diction. HoF?
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Post by Queen of Rain on Aug 12, 2006 8:04:35 GMT -8
thank you dear1 im sorry for being so inactive at the moment, im backpacking through europe and is currently in biarritz where i cant find a hotspot for my laptop, leaving me with lousy internet cafees with weird keyboards
i would like to work on the diction some but im so flattered by the nomination; yes!
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Post by Ramona on Aug 12, 2006 11:26:36 GMT -8
Well, I'll put it in as is, right now, and if you would like me to change any of it, just let me know.
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