I'm just trying something new.

[Ramona]

I thought I'd just play with words and formatting a little. I realize it's probably too much, but I wanted to experiment.

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purplepunchmagic
and the sound of violins
whispersweetwhisper
my soulbeat

simpering queens
on pamperedpetalfeet
pour me some more from this
life jug

caffiene

jitterbug dancers
twitching across the floors
sipping
leftovercarbonchampagne

teeth set in
saltinesmiles

see how they run
to the comfort of their lives
the comfort of their lies

and the wolf howls and screams
clutchingandgroping
at the groom's side

[Queen of Rain]

Its a little bit too muhc at times.. but it is brilliant at places! I think you could bind it together a bit more by using more relatoin between the fantastic imagery of the first and the last stanza.
I think the champange needs more focus than in the naologism i the 4th stanza as it does relate nicely to the caffeine and the last stanza..
but yea, its good, experimental, needs some work and it will be perfect