the sky

[shadowsglory]

When the sky shows rain,I cry.
When the sky hides I am alone.
When the sky tells me lies,I know where I am going
When the sky shows me a vision.
I feel knowledgeable.
Then there was that change.
Ino longer looked at the sky.
I no longer saw the meaning of communicating.
I no longer looked behind the message for clues.
I stare at the eyes of the people on tv.
How the light shines on it and their emotions.
Each one lost communication with the sky.
I look up once more at the sky.
There is a change.
I now stand still with the sky.

[cry,crayola.]

once again the repetition and a straitforward message. try to come at a different angle. be creative in presenting your work. develop a style that you feel comfortable writing in and that also appeals to the readers as well.

you just need some time to develop a style that works.