i don't understand

[shadowsglory]

I don't understand why people don't like me.
I don't understand why people look at me different.
I don't understand the word peace or war.
I don't understand why I am shaped like this.
I don't understand peoples hatered towards me.
I don't understand why people act like one another.
I don't understand why I cry at night.
I don't understand whyI try to impress.
I don't understand why I am invisible.
I don't know why I wrote this ...
But I do know myself more than anyone else...

[Ramona]

Ha! Now, this piece shows some potential. The second, third, fourth, and eighth lines are awesome and could be worked into their own individaul poems. That's poetic thinking.

[shadowsglory]

thanks i am glad you like it...this is one of my favorites i wrote :-)

[cry,crayola.]

repetitive......