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Post by Ramona on Feb 15, 2006 8:55:24 GMT -8
So last night I realized how cool haikus could be. Ok, so I got the idea a long time ago from Julie's writing, but I don't think hers were haikus, just short and sweet. Anyway, my point being I wrote some. here they are. ----- V-Day No one to whisper Sweet nothings into my ear, But I'm not empty.
Hospital Piled into the car. Brown bodies, olemn faces. We smell like worry.
James They don't ask anymore, 'Cause I don't have an answer. Don't want to know you.
She There she goes. Away. I miss her but don't love her. She doesn't love me.
Fever You give me fever. There's no innoculation 'Cause it happens fast.
Mind Games My head wants you bad. my heart wants you so much worse, But I don't need you.
Nighthoughts Sometimes late at night, I whisper to the dark and want you like I do.
Questions (Ian) There's an adjective That describes people like you. It starts with a "P."
Stop Stop telling me things That I should do, clubs to join. I'll do what I want.
Josh Stupid decisions. And we're both still so naive, What did you expect?
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Post by cry,crayola. on Feb 16, 2006 15:18:14 GMT -8
hehe. i never really liked writing haikus. i always messed up counting somehow. *sigh*
quite cute though. very nice. : )
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Post by Ramona on Feb 17, 2006 8:52:49 GMT -8
Yeah, smae here. But I was forced into them in sixth grade which could probably explain my instinct to shy away from them. Anyway, glad you liked them. Thanks for the comment.
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