a mother's goodbye

[cry,crayola.]

so go to sleep
the moon shines bright tonight
but it wont disturb you, little one,
oh my precious little one.
the night hold great things for you.
go off and dream
enjoy the darkness,
it's not that scary.
in fact, it can be wonderful.
oh so wonderful.
so go off onto your chariot, love.
whisk yourself away among the stars.
the night still loves you.
oh yes, it loves little ones the best.
always the little ones.
don't cry, dear.
i promise you i'll see you again.
so go off into the night
let it carry you away.
but whatever you do,
don't scream into it.
never scream.
the night will get mad at you, darling.
we don't want that.
go off, my dear.
don't mind the tears in my eyes.
i love you.
always remember that.
always remember me.
go off and sleep, now.
the night should take care of you.

[cry,crayola.]

i'm not real sure of where i was going with this one. tell me what you think!

[Robin]

The vocabulary seems a bit juvenile, and I don't like the lowercase thing.

But overall, it's okay. Nothing really stood out as completely horrible or totally awesome.

[Ramona]

I agree with Robin, though I do think the lowercase was cool because it kind of added to the simple feel, if that's what you were going for.

[cry,crayola.]

yay for simplicity. *claps*