Kerosene--Revised the tiniest bit--

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	Kerosene--Revised the tiniest bit-- Dec 29, 2005 22:05:52 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Dec 29, 2005 22:05:52 GMT -8 well, i certainly think this is amazing! i am totally in love with it. last stanza is a definite favorite! i really really love this! i think you did awesome!
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	Kerosene--Revised the tiniest bit-- Dec 30, 2005 9:00:27 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Dec 30, 2005 9:00:27 GMT -8 Thank you both. I'm happy with it, now.
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	Kerosene--Revised the tiniest bit-- Jan 11, 2006 9:33:10 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Jan 11, 2006 9:33:10 GMT -8 Thank you.
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."