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Sylvia
Dec 20, 2005 8:29:30 GMT -8
Post by Pseudomuse on Dec 20, 2005 8:29:30 GMT -8
chocolate strawberry muffins and a 1000 imaginary whose line points, if you guess who this piece is about.
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Sylvia
If you look through the dipping boughs of the elm trees you can see the glittering patches of light
that is her genius
hidden beneath shadow layers of cotton and year are the shards that splinter like little foot bones and tear at rational thought
to brave the new world would be a wonderous thing
it's all just a beautiful dream
two by two they fall the haunting obituary of silence
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Sylvia
Dec 20, 2005 10:32:54 GMT -8
Post by Ramona on Dec 20, 2005 10:32:54 GMT -8
I really love this, teh way you break apart your stanzas is very cool. Though, alas, I have no idea who it is about. I can't even think of any Sylvia person besides Sylvia Brown.
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Sylvia
Dec 20, 2005 10:44:09 GMT -8
Post by Pseudomuse on Dec 20, 2005 10:44:09 GMT -8
thank you hon, oh and heres a clue: think poets...
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Sylvia
Dec 20, 2005 11:02:46 GMT -8
Post by Queen of Rain on Dec 20, 2005 11:02:46 GMT -8
Let me guess, my favourite in english-written poetry, Plath plath plath!! Briliant diction and perfect length..
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Sylvia
Dec 20, 2005 14:10:33 GMT -8
Post by Ramona on Dec 20, 2005 14:10:33 GMT -8
Ooh! Yeah, Plath. I was never good with first names...and I'm insane.
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Sylvia
Dec 21, 2005 7:58:55 GMT -8
Post by Pseudomuse on Dec 21, 2005 7:58:55 GMT -8
thankies.
and queen yay I love her too, I just watched Sylvia thus this poem. I also have some others inspired by her life, I get along to posting them soon.
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Sylvia
Dec 21, 2005 16:00:27 GMT -8
Post by cry,crayola. on Dec 21, 2005 16:00:27 GMT -8
wow. that was simply amazing. no critique from me : )
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