The Limits of a Thesaurus

[onemoremile]

I dunno about this one, I don't really like it, and I can't get a decent ending, ah well, any ideas?

The Limits of a Thesaurus

I want to write because I'm hurting
And yet I can't describe this pain,
Not enought words to make you understand
pang
ache
throb
suffer
misery
sorrow
The thesaurus only goes so far
Before the only words left are non-existant,
Words etched in my heart
Stitched into my whole being,
But words I cannot speak,
write down
Words with no defenition,
Left the realm of text and entered emotion
To show the roots embedded in my soul,
And so, I cannot write you a poem

[darktears]

I like this one because it's just soo..I dunno, it's something, that I know.

[ScarletMornings]

I agree, i think this is amazing. It exactly captures the feeling i get sometimes when i want to write about something, but there's just not words for how I feel. i think this is really very good. perhaps it could've been a tad longer, but i just like long poetry.

[Ramona]

I lke this, teh way it is, even teh ending. However, there's something, I think it feels a little hollow, something's empty.

[cry,crayola.]

i love the idea of it all. i agree with sunshine (scarletmornings) about the length. it gives us more time and more material to savor.