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Post by Queen of Rain on Dec 15, 2005 14:13:34 GMT -8
She wasn’t old when she started to come home, with a broken heart as a charter trip souvenir
Yet when naivity, got out of fashion She would instead talk about adventures And how they all meant nothing (to her soft plastic heart) And many they didn’t, no many they didn’t nameless faces, anonymous passion many didn’t, that was true
But blood still pumped Plastic Heart And every year She kept her eyes open wide For this Don Juan she could not just forget In every singles paradise she kissed brown eyes, but none had his passion None had eyes like chocolate
Then quite by mistake, she one day stumbled across his name realizing, he had been gone for years Plastic Heart Had spent years silently looking, for someone who wasn’t there
Yes, my dear, He had told you to follow your heart. Waking up next to another lover again, you silently wonder where it got lost. Yes, where did it go, Plastic Heart?
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Post by Ramona on Dec 15, 2005 15:27:09 GMT -8
Amazing. The third stanza was very nice, very real to me.
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Post by cry,crayola. on Dec 15, 2005 20:26:06 GMT -8
wow. WOW. once again, you've done it. you've left me speechless. *sighs* i sit here in awe. i love how this all ties together. like, i guess i'm trying to say, i love the last stanza very, very much.
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Post by ScarletMornings on Dec 15, 2005 20:43:04 GMT -8
this is brilliant. like always. i have no more words to describe it!! you're running out my vocabulary!!!!
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Post by Queen of Rain on Dec 16, 2005 1:11:35 GMT -8
thank you guys.. i feel really flattered!!!
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