Our names

[Queen of Rain]

(This is a mess, like 3 poems that didn't work on their own and an atttempt to put them together, some times i liek the result, sometimes its jsut confusing, wonder what you think...)


Je crois les enfants crie ton nom
Do you remember how we used to dream?
we saw colours and birds and so many words
they never meant anything
and they never will

Silence turns the wind into a chanson
Seems forever doesn’t need a second shot,
but then, perhaps it was never there at all.
My name is just syllables spread with the wind
And dreams are history when we wake up

Arriving to a station,
a few minutes too late
That moment between your time
and the time that really is
Did that ever exist at all?
So now the birds make quirky little sounds
sounding just like your name,
is this what missing is?

I ran around screaming you name
in all these different languages
that I don’t even know

Cos’ you’re the same anywhere you are
Now you’re gone
and I’m just changed

Les enfants sont tranquilles
We were illusions in colour
and the words spoken are ancient now
This might be missing,
but the words were just words

Don’t remember what we used to dream
I dreamt
You dreamt
They have nothing in common.
Names are just syllables now

[ScarletMornings]

wow. this. is. absolutely. BRILLIANT. i have nothing else to say. this is beyond belief in my opinion. period.

[cry,crayola.]

My name is just syllables spread with the wind
We were illusions in colour

those two were my favorite lines, i think. ths IS amazing (for lack of a better word) once again, you've left me speechless. absolutly astounding.

[Ramona]

Wow, honest, if you think this is crappy I'd love to see some of your work that you think is good. This was fantastic (I'm running out of words to describe your work.)

[ScarletMornings]

i know. she makes me cliche. ugh.

[Queen of Rain]

THANK YOU soooooo much!!! This poem made me really kinda confused so I thought you all would find it just a mess, but I am so glad you all liked it!!

[Queen of Rain]

And o, I fyou wonder what the french stuff means its
I believe the children are screaming your name
and
The children are quiet now

[cry,crayola.]

i was wondering what those ment. i was about to call a friend who took french and ask them, but i doubt they'd know. bleh. neways, i still l-o-v-e it.

[darktears]

Ooh, I like this alot. It's so cool, how you mix the languages. It's soo nice. I love it.

[cry,crayola.]

it's nifty, huh? i wish i could write like queen. *sighs* but that, forever, will only be that. a tiny scruple of and attempt to be good at writing. bleh.
I LOVE THIS! to the oober billionth power, duh! lol.

[Confusion]

i wish i could write like this.

[Queen of Rain]

thank you and omg Confusion ive missed u a lot!!!

[ScarletMornings]

hof permission, please?? (i feel so pretentious when i ask!! weird, new powers, lol)

[Queen of Rain]

Of this? I don't still honestly see the perfection in this piece.. but thank you so much, yes you may