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There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised)

cry,crayola. Senior Writer yeah, i'm lame. Posts: 569	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 2, 2005 22:46:50 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cry,crayola. on Dec 2, 2005 22:46:50 GMT -8 i know! it's just hard to explain what's good about it. it's just all................really really good. yeah, i think the setting helps a lot, too. it's all so..........good.
	hopless stray prone to wander. crycrayola!, warrior; lest the blind lead the blind.

Queen of Rain Senior Writer I'm Swedish, that should explain it all.. Posts: 614	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 3, 2005 9:09:41 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Queen of Rain on Dec 3, 2005 9:09:41 GMT -8 Haha finally a poem that leaves you speckless (jk) no im just glad u like it..
	A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

cry,crayola. Senior Writer yeah, i'm lame. Posts: 569	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 3, 2005 11:06:50 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cry,crayola. on Dec 3, 2005 11:06:50 GMT -8 i do hate the word good though. it just doesn't cover the actual feeling or greatness (i don't like that word either.....great. bleh) of the poem.
	hopless stray prone to wander. crycrayola!, warrior; lest the blind lead the blind.

Queen of Rain Senior Writer I'm Swedish, that should explain it all.. Posts: 614	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 3, 2005 13:59:48 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Queen of Rain on Dec 3, 2005 13:59:48 GMT -8 So cool you say that cos the entire original idea about this poem is how Sad really can't cover any emotion with depth..
	A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

darktears Moderator I Don't Want to Mourn Our Love...But I Have a Feeling I Have too... Posts: 345	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 3, 2005 14:12:54 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by darktears on Dec 3, 2005 14:12:54 GMT -8 There are words that I used to use alot and stuff like good and sad but now that I've become a better write and I've seen those words used so many times, it bugs me to use them now.
	Chorus I like to drive away from all troubles. After I conquer all my fears. You don't know anything about me. I'd like to leave it that way. I'm not broken.

cry,crayola. Senior Writer yeah, i'm lame. Posts: 569	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 7, 2005 19:57:02 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cry,crayola. on Dec 7, 2005 19:57:02 GMT -8 i know! some words i use for lack of better ones just make me shudder. bleh.
	hopless stray prone to wander. crycrayola!, warrior; lest the blind lead the blind.

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 8, 2005 20:43:28 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Dec 8, 2005 20:43:28 GMT -8 i guess i missed that this was revised. all in all, i think it's brilliant. absolutely brilliant. just like everything else you write....
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

cry,crayola. Senior Writer yeah, i'm lame. Posts: 569	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 9, 2005 21:00:11 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cry,crayola. on Dec 9, 2005 21:00:11 GMT -8 brilliant, sara. absolutly amazing. great observational skills, eh?
	hopless stray prone to wander. crycrayola!, warrior; lest the blind lead the blind.

cry,crayola. Senior Writer yeah, i'm lame. Posts: 569	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 9, 2005 21:00:34 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cry,crayola. on Dec 9, 2005 21:00:34 GMT -8 and of course it's brilliant. it's queen we're talking about here.
	hopless stray prone to wander. crycrayola!, warrior; lest the blind lead the blind.

Queen of Rain Senior Writer I'm Swedish, that should explain it all.. Posts: 614	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 10, 2005 7:48:51 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Queen of Rain on Dec 10, 2005 7:48:51 GMT -8 Haha thank you cookies4breakfast i really enjoy being admired!! Right now I never get down to finishing my poems.. they al lay around in my room on traintickets and reciepts..
	A ship in a harbour is safe, but that's not what a ship is built for

somewhatpoetic Guest	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 15, 2005 21:16:22 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by somewhatpoetic on Dec 15, 2005 21:16:22 GMT -8 wow...that was sooo great!! this is just so original that I can't help but like it. I congradulate you on a job well done!

somewhatpoetic Guest	There are words so unattractive, Cherié (Revised) Dec 15, 2005 21:17:58 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by somewhatpoetic on Dec 15, 2005 21:17:58 GMT -8 humm...that was kinda clichey....eh..o well its late...