Re: Summer's End Mar 20, 2005 20:45:25 GMT -8 Quote Select PostDeselect PostLink to PostMemberGive GiftBack to Top Post by taliesin on Mar 20, 2005 20:45:25 GMT -8 Okay, so basically this one is just a big run-on sentence. And it doesn't even end. Italicize the thoughts of 'her' and put a comma after them, at least. It leaves something to be desired.
