Not sure if this a poem

[roxiecheerchika]

I'm not sure if this is a poem. Its just the way I'm feeling right now and I felt i had to get it out!

I hide behind them
my ways of fooling the world
Smiling
joking
being the life of the party
and they work their charms
even the truest of the true
have yet to notice
that behind these windows to my soul
glazed over with drops of water
are thoughts of escaping
moving on
leaving this place
starting over
sure they'll cry
blame themselves
but never will they think i'm better off
that i'm happier
i was happiest alone
and loniest when surrounded by them all
even the one i treasure the most
love so dearly
if only he knew
but he would try to stop me
say it wasnt worth it
but it is
it is.....

[Pseudomuse]

hmmm...I owe you a proper crit on this one since I think it has great potential. I'll start it pronto.

But here's my gift for being just wunderful dahling!


cheers PM

[roxiecheerchika]

lol...thankies...been dying for the banner...You really think it has potiential? maybe i'll work on it some more then

[Confusion]

i agree, has great potential, this piece will be amazing!!