Between Two Suns

Pseudomuse
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We went, we saw, we didn't quite conquer.

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Between Two Suns Jul 5, 2005 16:18:32 GMT -8

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Post by Pseudomuse on Jul 5, 2005 16:18:32 GMT -8

Between Two Suns: (the Spinning Wheels of Recorded Time)[/i]

solarwinds in linear virginity

i see the empiraen lights
from here
here beside you slipsleepingform
form the thoughts that
reach the end of the universe
and the restaurant there in
record time
time where my heart flutters
because you’re so close
close enough to engulf
my soul

soulshinning

beneath our rembrantstars
and vangoghscars
that fade in the mornlight
our semisoulsearching
leads to brokenmirrorshards
and that lonely houseofcards:
ruins the tastebuds dry
a queenofhearts and all
her lonely counterparts
seize the day but nothinglike a
carpe diem
daylimbs crowd nightfancies
too close for comfort
too dark for ease
and we’re falling too fast
full of knowledge
for any reminiscent innocence to break
the fall

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check out the sci-fi story behind this: Solarwinds: Life in Linear Virginity

Last Edit: Jul 6, 2005 10:07:16 GMT -8 by Pseudomuse

You'll never be quite the same again after that Bible you've been thumping all these years finally has enough and beats the living s**t out of you. - Horoscope in "The Onion"

I thought you just said we were done doing things the stupid way.

If you want to call me that, smile.

Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine.

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	Between Two Suns Jul 6, 2005 19:54:17 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Jul 6, 2005 19:54:17 GMT -8 HOLY HOT DANG! THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING! Ur such a unique and talented writer, it quite humbles me. Fantastic.
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Confusion Senior Writer Posts: 518	Between Two Suns Jul 7, 2005 7:59:12 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Confusion on Jul 7, 2005 7:59:12 GMT -8 holy hot dang indeed! great expression there scarlet mornings! this is a wonderful piece! your writing style is so unique
	"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

Ramona Administration Posts: 1,323	Between Two Suns Jul 7, 2005 11:53:02 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ramona on Jul 7, 2005 11:53:02 GMT -8 As always, amazind writing, I especially liked "seize the day but nothinglike a/ carpe diem."
	"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years. For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

ScarletMornings Administration http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/ednamillay/7278 Posts: 1,061	Between Two Suns Jul 7, 2005 20:31:08 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ScarletMornings on Jul 7, 2005 20:31:08 GMT -8 hey, thanks confusion. u get exalted for that! lol
	"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave, Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; Quietly they go, the intelligent, the witty, the brave. I know. But I do not approve. And I am not resigned." -- Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Dirge Without Music" Go to the link and read it!

Confusion Senior Writer Posts: 518	Between Two Suns Jul 8, 2005 7:22:49 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Confusion on Jul 8, 2005 7:22:49 GMT -8 hehe, wow, thanxies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
	"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

Pseudomuse
Senior Writer

We went, we saw, we didn't quite conquer.

Posts: 489

Between Two Suns Jul 8, 2005 19:07:27 GMT -8

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Post by Pseudomuse on Jul 8, 2005 19:07:27 GMT -8

if you like it read what inspired it, my sci-fi story Solarwinds...it here on the scifi board.

cheers PM

Last Edit: Jul 8, 2005 19:07:46 GMT -8 by Pseudomuse

You'll never be quite the same again after that Bible you've been thumping all these years finally has enough and beats the living s**t out of you. - Horoscope in "The Onion"

I thought you just said we were done doing things the stupid way.

If you want to call me that, smile.

Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine.

Confusion Senior Writer Posts: 518	Between Two Suns Jul 9, 2005 8:51:53 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Confusion on Jul 9, 2005 8:51:53 GMT -8 cool! i've never actually looked at the sci-fi board, but i shall read your story!!
	"One day I'll be a rainbow belly just like you," she whispered in his ear, "I'll cover painful scars with the brightest tattoos. I want to be a rainbow belly just like you."

roxiecheerchika
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Between Two Suns Jul 11, 2005 11:01:33 GMT -8

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Post by roxiecheerchika on Jul 11, 2005 11:01:33 GMT -8

Pseudomuse, once again you amaze me. If i could subscribe to you i would. I love that your indiviuality cleary shines through in your poems. They are full of meaning and thoughts that can be ordinary or exclusive to you but you put so much of yourself in them. I really love this poem. Its another piece of you for the world to see.

Pseudomuse Senior Writer We went, we saw, we didn't quite conquer. Posts: 489	Between Two Suns Jul 11, 2005 21:45:23 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Pseudomuse on Jul 11, 2005 21:45:23 GMT -8 thank you all! cheers PM
	You'll never be quite the same again after that Bible you've been thumping all these years finally has enough and beats the living s**t out of you. - Horoscope in "The Onion" I thought you just said we were done doing things the stupid way. If you want to call me that, smile. Of all the gin joints in all the towns in all the world, she walks into mine.

Post by Pseudomuse on Jul 5, 2005 16:18:32 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Jul 6, 2005 19:54:17 GMT -8

Post by Confusion on Jul 7, 2005 7:59:12 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on Jul 7, 2005 11:53:02 GMT -8

Post by ScarletMornings on Jul 7, 2005 20:31:08 GMT -8

Post by Confusion on Jul 8, 2005 7:22:49 GMT -8

Post by Pseudomuse on Jul 8, 2005 19:07:27 GMT -8

Post by Confusion on Jul 9, 2005 8:51:53 GMT -8

Post by roxiecheerchika on Jul 11, 2005 11:01:33 GMT -8

Post by Pseudomuse on Jul 11, 2005 21:45:23 GMT -8