Places

[Ramona]

Just finished writing this right now.

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I know places,
Where people go to die.
I know places,
Where day is really night.
I know places,
Where things can go unsaid,
I know a place,
We can go inside my head.

Take my hand and don’t let go,
Follow me with open eyes,
Wonderstruck and rendered mute,
Mind left behind with your goodbyes.

I know places,
Where children never cry.
I know places,
Where a face is always bright.
I know places,
Where people always look ahead,
I know a place,
We can go inside my head.

[Queen of Rain]

deep and beautiful... im a bit puzzled by your contrasts, but if ambigousity is your aim you were really successful..

[Confusion]

wow, it's like neverland... not in the jackson sense but in peter pan sense!! great piece