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Post by ScarletMornings on May 23, 2005 14:17:17 GMT -8
I smile run my fingers along the strokes of midnight painting the rain swirls of dark magic cloaking me waltz with shades black velvet spirits
arsenic and old lace black lace widow’s seduction studded with jewels of blood gossamer veils of lies black lies stained white hiding your face veins filled, running with poison the sickly sweet poison of desire might as well be arsenic
valentine in blood the color of your lips blow a kiss don’t tell my hair is satin black satin lining my bed dripping with poison can you taste it? hands buried in black satin smooth as the dark
the blanket of night tucks me in sings a lullaby of stained black lies my soul is silk black shattered silk ravaged beauty in the moonlit dark
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Post by Confusion on May 24, 2005 7:07:11 GMT -8
wow! very cool and imaginative!!!! i love it!
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Post by Queen of Rain on May 24, 2005 10:01:48 GMT -8
amazing pattern in that imagery.. great word choice even if rhythm could b more varied
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Post by ScarletMornings on May 24, 2005 19:30:44 GMT -8
THANK YOU!!! ;D
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Post by ScarletMornings on May 31, 2005 14:33:06 GMT -8
I just wanted to make a post so this will be at the very top of the page. . . maybe someone else will comment. (HUGE OBVIOUS HINT!!)
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Post by ScarletMornings on May 31, 2005 14:33:26 GMT -8
and what does MC's stand for?
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Post by Confusion on Jun 1, 2005 5:06:34 GMT -8
dunno, but apparently i am cooking them like a pound of bacon
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Post by ScarletMornings on Jun 2, 2005 21:43:16 GMT -8
me too. confusing, huh?
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Post by ScarletMornings on Jun 11, 2005 16:00:46 GMT -8
just going for the top of page (ONCE AGAIN HUGE OBVIOUS HINT, PLEASE COMMENT)
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Post by Confusion on Jun 12, 2005 2:52:26 GMT -8
I still think this is awesome!
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Post by ScarletMornings on Jun 22, 2005 10:02:44 GMT -8
You are without a doubt, my hero. I love you confusion.
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Post by Confusion on Jun 23, 2005 8:40:19 GMT -8
hehe, wow! thanx!!!
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