Lolitas, former prisoners of daylight

[Queen of Rain]

I stare at the sky
and mutter to the devil
- Are we dying today?
in a coffin in dirt
- Has it always been this white?
See Lolitas my lord

Back to our sins
that’s our journey
today

I want to ascend
white as the apron
that turned red
in the city
of Sabine.

Maria’s duty
as a desert woman
dressed in black,
Can I be your bride now
father?

I’m your Geisha

Let me be
violet
and white
hear my laughter, like an animal’s
carried for slaughter

Night in the desert
I was ripe enough,
to be eaten by sin
mankind’s of course,
I bear no Jesus,
tonight,
it is a child of my sin
a child of his lust
It is my daughter,
that even Limbo would neglect

If she was lucky enough,
to be spared our destiny
- Us prisoners of daylight

But no white blankets to see,
red blood on the black dirt floor
one day, my sister
will she too be eaten
We are the new Geisha’s
and only breastmilk
is still white.

See Lolitas my lord

[Queen of Rain]

edited it a bit, hope anyone wants top read my travel through the worlds unfairness...

[Confusion]

wow! i loooooooooooove this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! indeed does show the great unfairness of the world!!! i like the first stanza in particualar! perhaps another stanza at the end might round this beautiful poem off a bit better?

[Queen of Rain]

thank you, should i end it off with "See Lolitas my lord" to make it more circular in structure?

[Confusion]

yea, that would be great!