It's interesting. There are some good imagery phrases in there. Though I can't really give a positive or negative reaction without more than just a paragraph. The title did draw me in, though.
"Hold my head inside your hands. I need someone who understands. I need someone, someone who hears. For you I've waited all these years.
For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come, Until my day, my day is done. And say you'll come and set me free. Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."
