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Post by ScarletMornings on Mar 24, 2005 14:35:48 GMT -8
Light a candle for my soul my darkling soul Shades there are shades stifling my light lost light of the soul Gracious is the darkness caressing darkness Yet it binds more effectively than the weight of the world. I fear the dark the unknown but the dark belongs to lovers what does that make me? My candles are all gone hope melted rebellion burned strength spent trying to fight my darkness his darkness Now it's all so far away blocked by the shadow his shadow I reach but don't grasp eyes blind my glow is dim darkened by his shades Love is all that burns still barely there melting one shadow two Can love glow steadily to burn them all? the shadows the darkness he is my darkness I, his light all that keeps him here me here a ray in his darkness mine he is my darkness my glow fades so light a candle for my soul
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Post by kaidanasnan on Mar 25, 2005 6:14:40 GMT -8
I like it. The rythym is good, and I like the line, "Gracious is the darkness/caressing darkness."
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Post by ScarletMornings on Mar 25, 2005 13:19:51 GMT -8
Thanks. ;D
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