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[midnightwhitewolf]

"Eighty-six must be our secret number
To say among a crowd.
I feel we are one whenever we're together,
Though I daren't mention it out loud.
We giggle at the same idea unspoken
And smile in simultaneous disdain,
Existing in a single cell unbroken,
Two nuclei alike in joy and pain.
Outwardly we are just close friends
Because I do not wish to cause distress.
But when we're grown, the fairy tale may end
As we show our more authentic dress.
Meanwhile we're ourselves in secrecy,
Your silence merely adding to my secret glee."

-So whatcha think? This kinda just popped into my head one night. Lol, any way, give me your idea, I'm a newbie here, go easy on me.

[darktears]

Nice job...I really liked it! It was sweet. If you ever get a girlfriend I sudjest reading that to her.

[frontpagenews]

Its cute. The end could have been more something im not sure what exactly. But all in all very very good. Keep on writing!