Muse

[Pseudomuse]

roving touches
faint to dust
on my skin
rough kisses plaster
themselves
to my aching heart
an angel with battle-scarred wings
sighs fondly in my embrace
my inspiration-
alive
but breaking under
repeated abuse
like the Wall, she ruptures
with pride, hate and longing
but most of all fear
Goodbye, Lenin she remarks
to me
coddled in my
western cloister
rummpled and brittle
are the wings that
once sparkled with ambition
cracked are the pale lips
that once spoke the melodies
of
a charmer
lost is she now
my muse
for she’s run along
musing

[frontpagenews]

I love this, its beautiful.

[Pseudomuse]

thank you thank you thank you. i love it too. hehheh. ~Pseudomuse

[ScarletMornings]

Wow. What can you say? I'm speechless, and that, my friend, is a miracle. Just one question, and I hope I don't sound like a dumb a, but what is goodbye lenin? I really love this, it makes me think of a fallen angel, you know? or something unusual like that.

[Pseudomuse]

thank you everyone! anways Goodbye, Lenin! is one of my favorite movies. Its a german made movie, though but in wunderful. The plot goes like this: In 1990, to protect his fragile mother from a fatal shock after a long coma; a young man must keep her from learning that her beloved nation of East Germany as she knew it has disappeared. tada! yeah great movie! oh and um i changed the end or im going to do that right now. hehheh.

lurf PM

[louise]

Googbye Lenin rules! it is a great movie, especially when they roll out a huge cocacola poster right in front of the mothers window!

[Pseudomuse]

oooooh that was one of my favorite parts! go cococola...oh and the end letting her ashes go.