Tonight

[Pseudomuse]

another poem about my character La Femme Mystique from Eulogy of a Dreamer.

Tonight

Tonight you may see any number of things
Those that twirl, and dance, and are contented to sing
With much gusto, you must know
The theater’s the thing

Tonight you may hear a ballad or two
Or even a ditty about a witch’s old brew
A lovers’ quarrel, even a moral
And a count with his nose all askew

Tonight is the night for lover to kiss
And lances to miss, the magic exists
A fight, a knight
And even flight, oh what could ever go amiss.

Tonight for you the cards will shuffle
The wine will pour, and skirts will ruffle
A king, a ring,
Along with his queen will all get lost in the scuffle

Welcome lovers, seers, and pets; I am your host
A harlequine of sorts, but I don’t mean to boast
What’s that, the first act?
Oh here’s the part that I love most.

[Queen of Rain]

this poem tastes of classisism... well written... i wud choose object instead of thing to end the first stanza with though.. makes it less repetitive, adn thing is not a beautiful word..

[frontpagenews]

I must applaud you for your rhyming skills. Oh man that takes talent and since I am not the greastes at rhyming I give you many kudos for your ability to rhyme and rhyme so well. Sweet!

[Pseudomuse]

yeah, this and She are my first attempts a rhyming that are good. the rest are crap. usually when i try to rhyme my poetry comes out forced and childess and icky. but yeah i was pretty proud of myself on theses. thanks you guys I heart You all. oh and chapters about La Femme Mystique are going up pronto. oh and I'm gonna post poetry one of my best friends wrote.

Pseudomuse