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Post by 6Non6Real6 on Jan 22, 2005 16:36:32 GMT -8
~WiNTER~
The heat slowly dies down As spine chilling air approaches. Little kids look out their windows And see the leaves they formerly loved Fall and demise. The once full and fragrant flower trees Are now occupied by transparent lifeless imposters. When the wind hits the naked tree branches just right, It screeches 'Winter is Here'
Water is trapped in itself Frozen to the surface, Waiting to be broken so it can elude. When stepped on just right, It shrieks 'Winter is Here'
Tempting creamcolored mounds Spread raggedly down the horizon. Vivid traces of foot prints Perfectly scattered along the pure whiteness. When stepped in just right, It mutters 'Winter is Here'
Roads drenched in fog; Blurry silhouettes everywhere. Clouds building overhead Darkening the scene. When listened to just right, It roars 'Winter is Here'
The blistering cold slowly dies down As a warmer air comes amidst. Trees regain their stereotypical beauty And townsfolk come out of their cottages in awe To watch winter move on. Children dance around and take in the last bits of snow Before they dissappear. When watched just right, It shows Winter is gone...
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Post by ScarletMornings on Jan 26, 2005 21:12:52 GMT -8
Wow. This is a really cliche topic, and you managed to use amazing imagery to make something totally unique and original, and yo just get this really vivid image of winter, put in an unusual perspective. Great job, I loved it!
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Post by 6Non6Real6 on Jan 28, 2005 19:51:17 GMT -8
=))) Thanx a lot! You're the only to comment and it was a very nice comment ^_^
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