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Post by kaidanasnan on Jan 15, 2005 17:38:21 GMT -8
I like it. It's cool. The stanza you repeated was good, it added a lot to it.
Sorry, I'm kind of word-impaired today.
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Post by Sparks on Jan 16, 2005 9:55:25 GMT -8
Oh - thanks  I'm never sure whether poetry and lyrics are the same thing. That's where the repeated stanza came from... I think it's walking a fine line. |
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Post by quilleh on Jan 17, 2005 14:58:08 GMT -8
I agree. That stanza repeated is beautiful, especially the "...Roll down the windows to a picture frame..." or something like that. Thumbs up. ^_^
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Post by Sparks on Jan 17, 2005 15:06:49 GMT -8
 Thank you |
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