Once Again, Untitled

[kaidanasnan]

Inside this darkened room,
My darkened shadow lies,
Waiting for the answers,
That surely lie inside.

But no one comes to save me,
From this darkened hollow,
The shadows here do speak,
The darkness here does swallow.

So here I sit, still waiting,
Inside this darkened room,
Waiting for my savior,
To save me from this tomb.
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I know I posted this once, as I have it in my signature, but it went away. Crit is welcomed, and comments are great.

[louise]

nice....dark and nice. I just don't know about hte word 'lie' (Waiting for the answers, That surely lie inside.) maybe something like 'lurk' sounds better? And the answers, that? which seems more likely