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Post by darktears on Mar 8, 2006 18:43:23 GMT -8
Can You Look at Me? Look me in the eye And gaze like You love me...
Can you talk to me? Can you speak the words Every Girl wants to hear? I love you...
But that is gone. You ripped my heart, Like you would tear a pictue Or throw it a fire thats burning for us.
*Chorus* I know You don't Care. I used to Wanna be like you Thats before you tore me in two. Who is who?
So dance with me The questions still burning my ears. Not warmth, not cold Just burning, stinging, hating.
Oh no, I don't want this to go on and on. But I know it will.
Love me, Hate me, Forget me. Just Want me, trust me, leave me.
*Chorus* I know You don't Care. I used to Wanna be like you Thats before you tore me in two. Who is who?
Who are you? Who am I? Who are we? I know you cry At night. When your alone. I can see your tears. I know your fears.
Ooooh. Who is Who?
*Chorus* I know You don't Care. I used to Wanna be like you Thats before you tore me in two. Who is who?
Am I you?
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Post by darktears on Mar 13, 2006 10:44:22 GMT -8
Anybody?
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Post by Ramona on Mar 14, 2006 8:46:14 GMT -8
First stanza was very nice, but the second stanza got kind of cliche. Fifth stanza is brilliant. The ending is also fantastic. All in all, this was a great piece.
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