Good Girl

[sweetiegail]

I don't want to post two poems on the same day but this one just... came; you know what I mean? [It's been modified a little so it makes better sense]

Good Girl

And the little girl sat,
A sad look on her face,
Just like every day,
Her friends turned her away

She knocked before she went into the house,
She rung the bell as well,
At that moment she was shelved,
With all the other good girls

Why is it so hard,
To fathom integrity?
And why is it so hard,
With our lips secrets to keep?

I’ve been the good girl for so long,
I’m gonna break free,
I’ll rip up my old self,
And start a new me,
You want bad?
Just you wait and see,
I’m gonna bloom,
Into your wildest fantasies!

The little girl said thank you,
Seventeen times before they left,
Before she went out the door,
She felt compelled to say it again

I’ve been the good girl for so long,
I’m already breaking free,
I’m never looking back,
Never for you, never for me

Gone is the little girl,
Who’d sit by the stream,
Do her homework on time,
Dream good little dreams

You want bad?
Just you wait and see
I’m going to be,
Your fantasy!

Why is it so hard,
To fathom integrity?
And why is it so hard,
With our lips secrets to keep?

[Ramona]

I like the conept of this song, but the "I'll be your fantasy" lines just seem kind of wrong to me. I'm sorry I'm not more help.

[sweetiegail]

Yeah it does.... I'll think on what needs to be changes, thanks Ramona!

[darktears]

I really like that. I do, it's quite good.