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Post by pacificwriter on Nov 5, 2005 13:07:05 GMT -8
hello this is something i made up i hope u like it.......... OK this poem is called love and it alittle about my life.
I never understood the word love, is there such a word? is real i said i love too many times. sometimes i mean it sometimes i didn't care because it was just a word. sometimes i say it too everyone but now I'm saing it too u. hoping too hear u say it back too be but u don't so is there such time as love? or is it just a word?
ok u like? no copers
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Post by Ramona on Nov 5, 2005 13:24:13 GMT -8
OK, you probably shouldn't use ChatSpeak because sometimes it makes things more confusing and I think you should seperate out the lines. The poem didn't make sense in the beginning, you need to work on your clarity.
Ramona
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Post by pacificwriter on Dec 28, 2005 12:13:02 GMT -8
Thanks, for the help.
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