You Don't Notice

[darktears]

Tears are falling from her eyes.
Her cheek on the mesh pillow.
Thoughts racing through her mind,
None ever good to her.

Her mother calls her out for dinner.
She doesn't answer,
Just walks down in silence.
Feeling left alone in a world of danger.

*Chorus*
Somebody help me please,
She screams at night.
Her nightmares are real.
Unlike yours in your head.
She sinks away in a corner,
All alone.
You don't Notice,
No, you don't notice.


Her eyes showing secrets and lies.
She tells you I'm fine,
But it's not true.
You don't know her pain, you never will.

She wish the rain,
Could wash her away.
Wash away the pain and Misery.
Instead of being here.

*Chorus*x2
Somebody help me please,
She screams at night.
Her nightmares are real.
Unlike yours in your head.
She sinks away in a corner,
All alone.
You don't Notice,
No, you don't notice.



You don't notice,
How she hurts.
All you notice,
Is the outside.

*Chorus*
Somebody help me please,
She screams at night.
Her nightmares are real.
Unlike yours in your head.
She sinks away in a corner,
All alone.
You don't Notice,
No, you don't notice.

No, you don't notice.

[Ramona]

I like the part of the chorus where you say "her nightmarea are real/unlike yours in your head." i like the rest of the song, too, but that part's real cool.

Ramona

[darktears]

Thanks alot!

[Ramona]

No problem.

Ramona

[vampiressknight]

Love it!

[darktears]

Thank you!

[muzikishappiness]

I agree with Ramona, my favorite part of this song is: "Her nightmares are real/Unlike yours in your head" and my second favorite is: "She wishes the rain/Could wash her away/Wash away the pain and MiseryInstead of being here."

That is truely beautiful. Do you have music for it?? I could totally see (or hear, lol) an acoustic guitar intro, and for the verses a soft electric and for the chorus a loud heavy distortion with the electric...and then you reverse back to the acoustic intro...but I'm getting ahead of myself. LOL. I love this song. This is probably one of the best, unpublished songs I've ever seen.

I'd like to see more lyrics from you soon!!

[darktears]

Thank you very much. I have no idea for music...I kind of have a beat for it, but nothing, really. That would be really cool, your idea. To bad I can't play guitar..yet. Thank you very much.