Thank You *Added*

[darktears]

| | I added more to this song. I said I might...and I did. Lol. | |

I walk alone in the shadow
Of sleeping people in my mind.
I can not make these feelings go away,
Sadness lingers behind me.

You cry your tears and wipe your eyes.
You smile brightly in the light.
I walk away as you smile.
It's not like I meant to.

Sometimes I just....

*Chorus*
Live a little.
Cry a little.
Wish that I was with you.
And you make me run away from all of my troubles.
So I want to..thank you.

Thank you.
Thank you.
Ooooh, thank you.


You'll catch me whenever I fall.
I know you will because,
Before it has happened.
Thank You. Thank You.

You will light up my darkness,
When I am scared and alone.
You'll always make me happy.
No matter what I do or say.

You Make me...

*Chorus*
Live a little.
Cry a little.
Wish that I was with you.
And you make me run away from all of my troubles.
So I want to..thank you.

Thank you very much for being you.
Thank you very much for letting me be me.
You have made me so much better and happier.
Just for being you and helping me.

Thank you,
Thank you,
Thank you.
Ooh, thank you.

*Chorus*x2
Live a little.
Cry a little.
Wish that I was with you.
And you make me run away from all of my troubles.
So I want to..thank you.


Ooh, thank you.

[darktears]

Hmmm, nobody is replying. That makes me sad. Lol.

[darktears]

Anybody reply please??

[Confusion]

it's good...

[darktears]

um..thanks. That all?

[Ramona]

Very nice, my post is totally late. I especially liked this part in the second stanza,
"I smile as you walk away,
It's not like I meant to."

This part, however,
" I know you will because,
Before it has happened."
Sounds kind of odd to me, maybe instead say because/ it has happened before." It just seems kind of awkwardly worded to me.

Ramona

[darktears]

Thanks. I will work on it. I really like this song and would like to work on it lots more!