Cranky Day

[darktears]

| | My cousin and I both wrote this song. Together. She wrote the first verse and I wrote the course and second verse and the bridge. It's about having a bad day, which I'm sure we've all had. Lol. | |

Wake up and I'm really cranky.
Phone rings but I just don't want to answer.
Look in the mirror, who do I see?
Some weird person staring back at me.

Go down town my favourite store is closed.
My friends are doing something,
I don't want to.
I guess, I'll walk home.

*Chorus*
On this cranky day.
Nothings goin' my way.
On this cranky day.
I don't do anything.
Back up, get out of my way.
I'm in a bad mood,
On my cranky day.

At home and the t.v's on.
The newsman is telling me,
Thunderstorms are about to come.
'Guess I'll just sit down.

I don't know what else to do,
Then just cook food for you.
I can't even boil water, today.
Hurry up, get out of my way. Hey.

*Chorus*
On this cranky day.
Nothings goin' my way.
On this cranky day.
I don't do anything.
Back up, get out of my way.
I'm in a bad mood,
On my cranky day.

I'm so cranky,
I'm in a bad mood.
I would get out of my way.
Every thing's just going wrong.
Every thing's just going wrong....today.

Ooh, cranky day.
Ooh, cranky day.
Get....Out...Of...My....Way......

*Chorus*x2
On this cranky day.
Nothings goin' my way.
On this cranky day.
I don't do anything.
Back up, get out of my way.
I'm in a bad mood,
On my cranky day.

Cranky day.
Get out of my way.
Cranky day.
It'll be okay....tomorrow.

[Confusion]

nice ideas!! reminds me of another song... cant think of the name or artist but i remember one bit is 'radios playing songs that remind me of you'... i know that doesn't sound too similar to your song, but there are other bits to it which i can't remember.. but i remember were similar to yours

i realli like the song, although on here it's kinda hard to think what it would be like as hearing it is way better than seeing it for someone not so musical like me! However i think this is realli good!... sorry everything im typing in here seems to be coming out as rambles!

Could you use another word for cranky though?... maybe it's just me being english, but i don't like that word too much!

[darktears]

Well thanks. It's kinda hard to change the word cranky because it's kinda the whole part of the song. Lol, that's how we kinda got the idea except for the whole, you know bad day and stuff. I don't want to use bad because it's just to blah.

[Ramona]

It's really cool, original because it's about having a bad day and not a bad life. But I'd imagine it'd be kind of weird to sing cranky, kind of a hard word to get your mouth around, but that makes it more of an achievemtn! By all means, sing!

[darktears]

thank you.

[Confusion]

yea, very cool song and i agree it is an original idea...... but not sure how the word cranky realli would be sung... anyhow, great work!

[darktears]

I have a beat and stuff for this song already and I do sing cranky naturally. I've been singing since I was about 4 or 5. You just need to listen to the beat...somehow...lol and then you may be able to sing how cranky can be sung.

[darktears]

I told my cousin I posted this song and she was really suprised and stuff. She was like, "Uh, okay," and then I told her what you guys had said and she felt alot better. Lol.