Are You Afraid?

[darktears]

Are you afraid of the dark?
Are you afraid of the moon,
Dancing across the sky?
Or is it something, you try to make me beleive.

Are you afraid of ghosts?
Are you afraid nothing, or everything?
No reason why,
'Cause I'm just wondering....

*Chorus*
Are you afraid of love?
Are you afraid of the romance between you and somebody else?
Are you afraid of life, living in this world?
I just want to know, because
Everytime, I try to be nice to you,
or a girl tries to get to you...you seem to walk away...
So, are you afraid of love?

Mmm, yeah.

You never seem to love, somebody else,
Other then yourself.
That's my reason why, I'm asking you.
So many questions, just for you.

Please tell me honestly, are you afraid of anything?
Please, just answer me, are you, are you, are you, afraid of love?

*Chorus*
Are you afraid of love?
Are you afraid of the romance between you and somebody else?
Are you afraid of life, living in this world?
I just want to know, because
Everytime, I try to be nice to you,
or a girl tries to get to you...you seem to walk away...
So, are you afraid of love?

Nobody's ever tried, and
Nobody's ever asked me why.
I seem to follow the sky.
No reason, why you should do it to.

I just want you to know,
No matter what, no when
No matter, no matter why,
I'll always be by your side.

*Chorus*
Are you afraid of love?
Are you afraid of the romance between you and somebody else?
Are you afraid of life, living in this world?
I just want to know, because
Everytime, I try to be nice to you,
or a girl tries to get to you...you seem to walk away...
So, are you afraid of love?

C'mon, tell me please, just tell please, just answer, oh answer me.

Just honestly, Honestly tell me,
Are you afraid of love?
Are you afraid of life?
Living in this world.
Oh, yeah,
Are you afraid of love?

[darktears]

Please could somebody reply!/me

[jackfrost]

Well, I'm not much of a music critic, but I liked what I read! I like it's...plot? ...whatever you call it (curse of a writer--only knowing writing words!) the ...well, whatever the flippin' thing is. It's a bit overused, but that fact didn't ruin your song. In fact, it's so freaking overused that it was good to see one that's actually well written! ;D One thing though. The line...."Everytime I try to be nice to you" just didnt seem to flow like it should of. My suggestion would be to find another way to convey what you're saying. Otherwise...'s all good! I have enjoyed reading your other stuff too.... ;D
toodle pip,
jack e. frost

'Let's all go 'down under' and marry handsome Aussies!"
"Here here! *#%$ the Gutenburg taxi's!"

[darktears]

Merci!! Thanks alot!

[darktears]

And also some of the things are hard to understand when you don't know the beat.

[Confusion]

I think it's always hard to decide if a song i good or not when you can only see it without any idea of the tune... but even so i think yours seems realli good!!

[darktears]

Thanks alot to you all! I enjoy getting feedback from different people.

[vampiressknight]

Love it!