"Blood Moon"

[blutmond]

this was the second song i wrote... Hmm i have to say it came from my user name and thriller.. Lol... well i have to say this is probaby my favorite that i wrote.. Please give me some feed backs


Blood Moon
By Blutmond

When the clock strikes 12 baby
The moon starts dripping blood
The horror intensify
Your mind going crazy

(Chorus)
Baby it’s a blood moon.
Its like a full moon expect its bloody!
Blood Moon Baby

Sometime at night baby
Shadows will walk by
You glance around
There’s nothing

(Chorus) x2
Baby it’s a blood moon
Its like a full moon expect its bloody!
Blood moon baby

You walk outside baby
You look for a full moon
All you see is blood-covered moon

(Chorus)
Baby It’s a blood moon
Its like a full moon expect its bloody!
Blood moon baby

You go crazy baby
You hear howls of horror
The terrifying sound it is

(Chorus)
Baby it’s a blood moon
Its like a full moon expect its bloody
Blood moon baby

The darkness surround you baby
You hear sounds
Its terrifying
Until the morning

(Chorus)
Baby it’s a blood moon
Its like a full moon expect its bloody
Blood moon baby

Blood Moon
Its like full moon expect its bloody
Blood moon baby
Baby
Baby

[vampiressknight]

Okay, okay. *smacks self on forehead* Okay....
I LOVE the title. Well, the word baby is definitely overused here. And the verses are sort of strange. I don't really like the first or third verse. Love the second verse though. That's all I can really say.