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Post by midnightwhitewolf on Mar 21, 2005 13:15:45 GMT -8
*Intro* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
When I try to reach out, you move away from my hands You've never told me why; We make time to spend But that time is spent silently So now it doesn' feel right When I try to ask you, you never understood it You have no idea; but I'm not done But when I explain You say I complain And you only listen for a moment
*Bridge:* Is there a fire if you don't see the smoke? We can't get higher if you don't let it go.
*Sub:* Ooh Ooh Ooh How did My heart ever get like this? How could someone ever hurt so bad
*Chorus:* That you can't see it I've been kicked inside Take it all away Oooh Ooh Ooh How did your heart ever get so cold How did someone ever get so close That you just don't know How it feels inside You just want it gone
I used to think, it was a phase I would go through But how come it feels like this? Now It's just an easier thing to believe That I was never the one *Sub* *Chorus*
*faded*Whatever they could do / Whatever they could say You Can try to Run and forget the nightmare *faded*Whatever they did / Whoever you blame You could run night and day, But where is the nightmare gone? (*Where*)
*Bridge* *Chorus to Outro* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *Outro*
Hey-hey, again, I'm still fairly new, so go easy on my work! ;D
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Post by darktears on Mar 23, 2005 13:49:31 GMT -8
Hey, Nice job...I liked it...it was kind of hard to understand because I couldn't hear the tempo or beat or anything. Keep up the good work.
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Post by Queen of Rain on Apr 4, 2005 7:54:01 GMT -8
i agree you need to work on the first verse it doesnt come out as a song lyric rhtyhmically, contents wise its really good though.. intresting fade-away..
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