P.S You fuck me up

[Queen of Rain]

THe first songlyric since 6th grade.. excuse the profanity... im sitll working on this one but could need some feedback...


Chorus:
Kill me now
You fuck me up
Really bad
You let me eat cake
I wish I didn’t care
When you fuck me up
Really bad
Now you really do

Every time we meet
Every time we hug bye bye
I wanna tell you
Leave a note
That you still are more
Than this very good friend
And baby baby baby
Ps. You fuck me up

chorus

I let the time elapse
Thinking all would be OK
That we could only be friends
Til it all collapsed
When I met you again
And those feelings are still
There, here inside me
The feelings that made us
More than friends
Cant you see
You make my heart ill
Oh, you really fuck me up

Chorus

And your lips so nice to kiss
My eyes should tell you
Its something I miss
Now smiling is all good they do
To me, baby why cant I have them
Cos your smile has the effect
Turning my world upside down
I cant do anything for anyone
Since light is dark,
Since tears don’t leave a mark
Neither do a kiss
But they remind me of something I miss

Chorus

Turning me upside down
I cant do anything for anyone
So fucked up baby
Please randomly maybe
Hint that this is not how you feel
That my smile wont do for you
Friendship isn’t good enough
I cant focus, I cant sleep
Light is dark
Tears left no mark
I cant listen to their words
When Ive heard yours, oh lord
I don’t care
This is what you do to me!

(Let them eat cake)

You fuck me up
You fuck me up
You fuck me up
Really bad
You really do
Do you care??

[Ramona]

It was interesting adn angry. liked the 'p.s.' thing. Rock on.

[darktears]

Nice song...it was very rocky...I think, I would love to hear this with a melody and beat and stuff.

[Queen of Rain]

thank you, it would most likely end up as a punk song hehe... im glad u liked it, im gonan sit down and perfect the verse rhythm some day when ive got energy..