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Post by Queen of Rain on Jun 4, 2005 12:26:08 GMT -8
Forever
is a theoretical concept
that is synonymous to
when somehting is
perpetual
neverending
eternal
And people who claim
Love is
neverending
Should thus comprehend
They are dealing
with
Theoretical ideas
And as emotions
Rely on neurotransmitters
That has developed through
Evolution
(Which has nothing to do
with this)
And that is science
Meaning
Testable theories
Thus love
Is biological
And were all fooled
By fairy tales
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Post by Confusion on Jun 4, 2005 14:00:02 GMT -8
Nice and raw! i like it!! there's not much feeling to it however, perhaps this would be better if inbetween the raw, fact no love stanzas, there were short stanzas of the opposite, showing contrast... only a suggestion though, it's great like this too!
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Post by Queen of Rain on Jun 5, 2005 1:03:49 GMT -8
it was just raw thoughts that came up in my head.. im afraid that is how i felt about lovve for the moment.. but maybe i couyld add the emotions of hurtness in italics?
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Post by Confusion on Jun 5, 2005 2:13:58 GMT -8
Sounds like a good idea! I think your idea is far better than mine, if it's how you felt than the true emotions are better than a contrast!
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Post by ScarletMornings on Jun 8, 2005 15:24:28 GMT -8
i'm a sucker for romance and love, though sadly i do not believe i'll find it( even out of all the male species, i don't think there's anyone crazy enough to fall for me!!) but this does express you emotion amazingly well. i like it, even if i don't agree with the concept, and that's a really cool thing, because you made me like something i don't agree with, and that's a hard thing to do, so congrats. this is a good poem.
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Post by Queen of Rain on Jun 9, 2005 23:51:58 GMT -8
thank you; this is not how i feel all the time but sometimes when they in moulin rouge ask "do you believe in love?" i just want to scream NOOOO... thats basically what i wanted to express here..  |
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Post by Confusion on Jun 10, 2005 8:15:18 GMT -8
yup! It's a great poem! I understand totally how you feel... although i do like to think there is someone out there for all of us!
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Post by ScarletMornings on Jun 11, 2005 16:04:08 GMT -8
well, hopefully, but what is the chance they're gonna wanna be with me if I find them? (i'm not saying this about you). AND YOU HAVE SEEN MOULIN ROUGE?!?! Thank God, I thought I was the only one. Don't you just ADORE that movie? I looove the part where they do the tango and sing Roxanne. i don't know, nicole kidman is SOOOOOO pretty. I wish i looked like that!!! lol. it makes me wanna write a poem, but i don't know . . .
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Post by Confusion on Jun 12, 2005 2:51:07 GMT -8
I AGREEEE!!!!!!!! moulin rouge is the best film ever! Wow, i think i'm gonna watch it later today now! nicole kidman is incredibly pretty, mainly in moulin rouge! I love the whole film!!! I love when they sing lotsa different bits from different songs! The music is one of the best bits about it, i think! I listen to the soundtrack non-stop
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