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Welcome Dec 6, 2004 13:29:39 GMT -8

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Post by darktears on Dec 6, 2004 13:29:39 GMT -8

Intorduction: Welcome to my life,
Welcome to my life,
Welcome to my life,
Welcome to my life,

Verse 1:

Welcome to where I live,
Welcome to where I cry,
Welcome to where I smile,
Welcome to my life

Welcome to where I have a-tti-tude,
Welcome to where people never get scared of me,
Welcome to where I laugh,
Welcome to where I die,
Welcome to where I go,
Welcome to my life,

*Chorus*

Oooooh, Welcome, Welcome, Hello,
Nooooo, I don't want to go,
Welcome to my happiness,
Welcome to my life,

Places where, I know my name,
Places where, We think the same,
Places where, I dance and dance and dance,
Singing slooow, singing fast,
Singing down, Soprano
Going up, Going down,
In my life

*chorus* x2

Oooooh, Welcome, Welcome, Hello,
Nooooo, I don't want to go,
Welcome to my happiness,
Welcome to my life,

Can you feel the beat, pulsing through your heart.
Going on your feet, vibration from the start,
Can you feel the beat, pulsing through your heart.
Going on your fee, vibration from the start.x2

Welcome,
Welcome,
oooh, Welcome,
Just, Welcome

*Chorus*x4
Oooooh, Welcome, Welcome, Hello,
Nooooo, I don't want to go,
Welcome to my happiness,
Welcome to my life,

Welcome to my life.

*Chorus*
I like to drive away from all troubles.
After I conquer all my fears.
You don't know anything about me.
I'd like to leave it that way.
I'm not

broken.

darktears Moderator I Don't Want to Mourn Our Love...But I Have a Feeling I Have too... Posts: 345	Welcome Dec 9, 2004 14:10:17 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by darktears on Dec 9, 2004 14:10:17 GMT -8 Is anybody going to reply? Hmmm, I think this board is getting low on people!
	Chorus I like to drive away from all troubles. After I conquer all my fears. You don't know anything about me. I'd like to leave it that way. I'm not broken.

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Welcome Dec 9, 2004 14:20:47 GMT -8

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Post by Ramona on Dec 9, 2004 14:20:47 GMT -8

No, actually, it's just that some people don't like to reply to others' work, they just want theirs commented on. Anyways, I think it had some good places, and some not-so-good places. I thought the repetition might be a bit much, but maybe it's background voices or something, I'd like to hear the melody on this one. If you can record it or something, could you send it to me at allergictowonderbread@yahoo.com? Thanks, and keep it up.

"Hold my head inside your hands.
I need someone who understands.
I need someone, someone who hears.
For you I've waited all these years.

For you I'd wait 'til kingdom come,
Until my day, my day is done.
And say you'll come and set me free.
Just say you'll wait, you'll wait for me."

usgeisha Guest	Welcome Dec 10, 2004 0:10:37 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by usgeisha on Dec 10, 2004 0:10:37 GMT -8 The "Welcome to my life", though it is supposed to be like that... I thought it was too much. It's okay, but could use some editing--I think it would also help if I knew what the melody was.

dominicmonaghan Novice No greater love =) Posts: 11	Welcome Dec 10, 2004 5:30:32 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by dominicmonaghan on Dec 10, 2004 5:30:32 GMT -8 if ya didn't say, welcome to my life, so much, it would sound alot better
	trampled rose... worn and destroyed. bring to me the love that gave you your meaning

behindTHEmask Senior Writer "You're beautiful in a way that isn't beautiful at all." Posts: 512	Welcome Dec 10, 2004 12:56:50 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by behindTHEmask on Dec 10, 2004 12:56:50 GMT -8 It's okay. The Welcome to my life seems over-used a little. But then again, whenver I read it, I think of Simple Plan and their song. It's in my head now.
	I'm not asking you to love me. I'm just asking you to like me really hard. I like you, and I like you bad. [Jakob] of [DeCapulet]

darktears Moderator I Don't Want to Mourn Our Love...But I Have a Feeling I Have too... Posts: 345	Welcome Dec 10, 2004 17:17:30 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by darktears on Dec 10, 2004 17:17:30 GMT -8 I didn't rip simple plan off. And it sounds way better recorded and all. It's just you can't hear the melody, so it seems probaly stupid to you guys..lol, but thanks anyways
	Chorus I like to drive away from all troubles. After I conquer all my fears. You don't know anything about me. I'd like to leave it that way. I'm not broken.

junipercayenne Guest	Welcome Dec 11, 2004 11:54:38 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by junipercayenne on Dec 11, 2004 11:54:38 GMT -8 Too many welcome's.

Post by darktears on Dec 6, 2004 13:29:39 GMT -8

Post by darktears on Dec 9, 2004 14:10:17 GMT -8

Post by Ramona on Dec 9, 2004 14:20:47 GMT -8

Post by usgeisha on Dec 10, 2004 0:10:37 GMT -8

Post by dominicmonaghan on Dec 10, 2004 5:30:32 GMT -8

Post by behindTHEmask on Dec 10, 2004 12:56:50 GMT -8

Post by darktears on Dec 10, 2004 17:17:30 GMT -8

Post by junipercayenne on Dec 11, 2004 11:54:38 GMT -8